Thursday, August 9, 2012

Reflective essay about spring

 I want to explain the summary of the video 'Spring'. A young monk bullies other animals by tying a rock to some animals. The young monk never knew that an old monk was watching him.  Next day the young monk was tied with a rock on his back. The old monk made him confess. After the confession the old monk ordered him to untie the rocks on the animals.When the young monk went, the animals tied with a rock were dead. He cried in sadness.

 This relates in real life like bullying. First when bullying, the attacker thinks it is just a practical joke. However if the victim does something like killing himself, the attacker feels sorry. Also the attacker would get a strict punishment. It is related to getting a rock tied to your back.

 Let me share my experience. Once, when I was bored, sitting in the outside I decided to play with an ant, actually bullying it. I finally threw the ant into a puddle. Later when I looked, it was dead. I felt sudden pity that I was so sad.

 When I was young I was playing with a beetle cocoon while by accident the horn was broken. Later the beetle was hornless. It was quite sad to see it.

 We should not bully other animals. Think if ourselves are getting bullied, tied by a rock. I'd hate to think that. So we should not bully animals. Thank you for reading

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