Kony is a terrorist who was a rebellion in the Congo. He had gathered boy soilders from their parents. Jason Russell was the creator of the ' Invisible children'. His group made the video Kony 2012, which is a 30minute video. It was made for making Joseph Kony famous.
To begin with, making Kony famous with Kony 2012 means it can be hearned to Kony. Rumors spread fast. So it means that Kony could hide into the forests more deeply to avoid the attention of the army, so that it can make capturing him a failure.
More over, well the famous terrorist Osama bin laden was cought after the terror of the twin building which was about 2001, September 11th. After about ten years in 2011, he was killed. Which could also mean that it could take a lot of work to catch Kony.
Finally, if Kony is famous Kony could well make himself gone, for few years then he could suddenly rise more powerful then before and can make his wish come to true.
So these are my reasons why Kony should not be famous. There could be other reasons, so please comment me if you know about the other ways. Also comment me if you disagree with me. Thank you.
The reasons are short, I think.
ReplyDeleteYou should put in a few pictures, and each paragraph is too short.
ReplyDeleteHi Alex,
ReplyDeleteThis essay is far too short. It lacks details and it is unclear what your opinion is until the end. Next time state your opinion clearly in the introduction.
You have some interesting points but you need to add opposing ideas and rebute them. The essay also needs pictures and you should include the Kony video. Good luck with your future assignments.
Way too short but good essay.
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